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Critiques
My first impression about this one was (when I looked at in in a small-sizes version, as a preview): A spaceship landing in its port! Ha, but I was mistaken. It's a friend of you climbing in Manchester! Nice idea, I think (and finally you found a model! :]) but - in my opinion there are some things which could improve vision. First of all it's very centered again! You could have amplified the impact & vision by avoiding this. (:
The light is very appropriate though your point of view isn't that original, maybe it could have helped if you enlarged the focus on the models view or the surreal sourrounding - which is very original, I think! The model's expression just doesn't fit that much into the context of it. :]"
Altogether your picture is a very nice one and I really hope that I could help you, I'd love to see more of your UK pictures!
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