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:iconerdbeersternchen:
Okey, because I had to impression you'd like to have a critique about this one, I will write you one!
My first impression about this one was (when I looked at in in a small-sizes version, as a preview): A spaceship landing in its port! Ha, but I was mistaken. It's a friend of you climbing in Manchester! Nice idea, I think (and finally you found a model! :]) but - in my opinion there are some things which could improve vision. First of all it's very centered again! You could have amplified the impact & vision by avoiding this. (:
The light is very appropriate though your point of view isn't that original, maybe it could have helped if you enlarged the focus on the models view or the surreal sourrounding - which is very original, I think! The model's expression just doesn't fit that much into the context of it. :]"
Altogether your picture is a very nice one and I really hope that I could help you, I'd love to see more of your UK pictures!
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....is that you?....sorry for the profound ( y think thats how u write it) well....idiocy of this message.....but....is that blond hair or red?:)):D...and again...IS THAT YOU?:))....y cant criticize since y have no talent in photography....realy...none!... the color spectrum revolves around the hair color...the street light thing, and the building material....soo....y love it....:)....can y call this a critique.....:))
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I wish it would be me, but this kind-of-red-haired beauty is her :iconstrawberryicecreme: :)

uhm...since I haven't seen any of your photographs, I can't say "Yes you are right" :XD: I just can imagine that it can't be that bad, because of your drawing compositions. I think that those who can do it in drawings, can also do it in photography. = D

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The background is amazing. I love the setting. <3 I'm in love with the urban jungle type places. Thought it's not too urbany, I really don't know what I mean but I love it.

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